Sunday, June 27, 2010

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The white polished wooden door of the flat X2 situated in the tenth floor of the newly built and less occupied sky-scrapping Spanish style apartment, opened. He and She came through the door to their newly brought flat. They are couples. He works for a Multinational company as a senior software engineer. He is just like ordinary human being. He is a geek kind of guy. He is very intelligent and hard working. He is one of the outstanding performers of their company. Though in his company they are following strict rules regarding timings, there are some exceptions for manager’s pets. He loved his wife very much.

She works as a play school teacher. She was from a very rich background. Her father was a big business man. But she was working as a teacher just for time pass. The guy’s family was not as rich as the girl’s but her father accepted for her marriage, because their marriage is a love marriage. Also they are newly married.

The white door of the flat opened from inside. “Honey, I’ll drop you at the school”, he said. She replied, “It will take 15 more minutes for me to get ready.”. “Should I wait?”He asked. She told him that she would take an auto to the school and asked him to leave. Bang, the white door is closed. He drove his new red color Maruti Swift to his office. A 15 minute later the door was opened from inside. “Tring Tring “her mobile cried. It was her school head mistress, told her that since it was raining the school is not working today. After the call her mobile died of no battery. She ran inside the room to put the mobile back in charge.

He called her mobile to ask whether she reached school but it was replied by the operator that the mobile is switched off. So he called the school and found that the school is off today.

The white door of the flat was still open. She was cooking for the lunch. A black shadow just went intersecting the axis of the white door and entered the kitchen of the flat X2.the shadow also contains the shadow of two cloth pieces. The shadow is a man’s shadow. He blind folded her with one cloth and tied her hands with the other. He dragged her to the bed and made her lie down on the bed. She was shouting loud “help help”. He traversed his hand over her body. By the time she realized what he wants actually. She said,”Hey, I know you want to f*** me. Don’t hurt me. Untie me. I am ready to do this with you”. She realized the sudden pressure loss over her body. The shadow went through the white door exiting the apartment. She removed her hand cuff with his mouth and uncovered her blind fold. She was surprised that her plan to make him untie her hand and after that she could use some weapons which she and her husband placed in the bed room for safety, to attack him, didn’t work. But any ways she was happy that he left her "untouched". She closed the white door and latched it.

The shadow went to the basement and got in to the red color Maruti swift with heart break

This is my first attempt to write stories. Tell me if it is good. Also guys please tell me a title for this story..

A short story by,

Dheena

2 comments:

  1. Hey dheena good one, cud be well written I felt, I think it comes by experience :-)

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  2. Great da. I can't think of an apt title for this one as of now. keep posting stories like this. good luck!!

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